“Orange” by Fizchev
Part 1
Character
“Shakespeare made us.” — Harold Bloom
He said ‘stand by’ — this
isOctober, and implied:
Stand by, pomegranate, indisa-
rrayof pickles . . .
and doesn’tlook at
all like Bottom, thoughsurely came rimshot
cymbal stand-ups
from some kind, bottom ofanother other, perhaps
cargo ship’sbilge sailors scour.
bad movie.
GoodLangston Hughes’s sailors? What have “beige sail-
ors with large noses” todo with
him, they’d say. This is no sail-or — agreed.
No ship’s Cap’n Awesome.And, wait for it (. . . a few days . . . just a few weeks . . .):
THAT SHIP SAILduh huh?!
Or — ?Cut to b-
uttercups and birdsong.Nor has he, the Times will
float, Bottom’s allergic way-s — due crowd
condescensionat the least. Harold, then —
we get: What is he?
Part 2
i
The Sound of Jurisprudence
Secretary of the corpusculat ask, —
for the raisin pud-Ding theory of das
Atom — is history — it’s not October anymore,not in jurisprudence —
do juiced prunes dance?Say it and you perf-
ormed it ’roundhere still it’s
an offgas, these elections, and I’m a gust of thiselectron-distant
door, through which the sound —creep online:
juicedprune danc-
e trying to be athing, one vide-
o anyway why’s it up
to attract a child“this video for you, I made
before going to work.”
ii
Video (videam, videor . . .)
So much for Miltonic effort.
In the famous opening lines, “disobedience, and the Fruitof that Forbidden Tree. . . .
With loss of Eden,” he’s got dive-rging vowels and consonants,
notes Reuven Tsur: “sounds of ‘forb-idden’ and of ‘Ede-
n’ in-cluded in [clued in
to — glue — ] ‘disobedience’,”formative backg-
round for staid arg-ument. A word is being blocked! while
don’t think of it, not that onewhat word, think!
writing a poem, and . . .nope, so / this way
to cognatespelled p-e-r-v
stress on that first syllable,
iii
Discontinuum
Juiced Prune Dance Man,
“before going to work,” pale roundest faceabove, where I’d’ve
wanted formingbackground moon. Without edges or glea-
m, he’s no white plate.Poe’s “chilling and killing”
no background mat-eri-
aleither (and imagine backgrou-
nd checkinghim) — literally
his sound con-verges in foreground. The algorithm
result:unfortunate — I don’t want
it ranking, and understandnow
why a great poet out ofcharacter
— Bob Perelman: homage! —would undo Milton’s gr-
ound next after Poe’sto rid the alphabe-
tof sound
reverberate reverberat-ting,
minim-eyes-zing
eve-n
phetamor to isolate-d
m-omen-
ts, for mature ejaculation only.
Louis Cabri's poetry includes Hungry Slingshots and Posh Lust, both with New Star Books; Poetryworld, with CUE; and The Mood Embosser, Coach House Books. Poems from the same series as "Compartmentalized Comportments" appear at thetypescript.com and in the print poetry magazine out of Vancouver, Some #1. He teaches at the University of Windsor.