Sunday, September 3, 2023

Colin Dardis : First Real Poet: Mark Madden

 

 

 

 

Quite possibly, the first poet I met was some local scribe, now made anonymous through the erasing power of time and memory, drafted in by my primary school to spend an hour or two showing disinterested children the magic of words, the kind of work I now find myself occasionally doing. If this even did happen - and it's the kind of thing we do a lot of here in Ireland, because we have a lot of poets desperate for freelance work, and in my experience, teachers will happy push the school to pay for anything that allows them precious time away from their class – I have no recollection of it. We certainly studying poetry, but in primary school, this mainly involved getting the class to paint pictures of scenes from the poems. However, it taught us that words could rhyme with each other, and that was my gateway into poetry, writing silly verse to amuse my friends in class.

It wasn't until my early twenties, a year or two in to university and years removed from nonsense rhyme but still churning out juvenilia, that I even considered seeking out the company of other poets. Poetry was something people wrote in their bedrooms: once in a while you might venture to reveal a page to a friend and seek their opinion, but otherwise, it was a solitary pursuit. Yet somehow, I got wind of a poetry night happening in the city centre. Culturally, poetry didn't exist in Belfast outside of the universities. The idea of a cafe hosting a poetry night, and that people might consider this as a viable form of entertainment for a Friday night, was a radical idea.

Arcadia Coffeehouse existed in a now burnt-out small shopping arcade in the city's Cathedral Quarter, nestled amidst a rotating menagerie of enterprises; tattoo parlour, a second-hand record store, a local crafts shop, the offices of a film festival, and other vaguely bohemian ventures. All small-time operations, all surviving month by month. To get in, we have to bang on the shutter at the back entrance of the arcade. It is not long into the new millennium, but most of Belfast has yet to figure out a thriving nightlife. All the other businesses nearby are shut up for the weekend. Stepping into the coffeehouse however feels homely: Arcadia wasn't like the clinical, mass produced coffee chains we experience how; it had tables with hand-painted designs, mismatched chairs, local art on the walls instead of prints from Ikea, yellow walls that gave the impression of a beach hut rather than an eating establishment.

This is the first time I've ever been to any kind of poetry night, so I have no frame of reference to how it works, what I'm supposed to do, or what people expect. We sit on a sofa that faces out towards the mall passage, and spend the night with our heads turned round, looking over the back at the sofa to the readers, who stand up to read near the counter. The host is Mark Madden, who runs the place with his Canadian wife, Debbie. Immediately, I can see he is everything I how know a host should be: enthusiastic, welcoming, talented, and just a bit mad. At times, his delight in being able to share this space with fellow poets makes his eyes shine, and I can almost imagine him foaming at the mouth in frenzied pleasure. He is my first live experience of a poet in the flesh, and will become a template for my own emceeing aspirations.

When it comes my turn to read, I am nervous: having have a childhood speech impediment, and attended speech therapy classes all throughout primary school, I do not enjoy public speaking. In fact, I hated having to stand up in front of a class in school. So why am I here now? Because poetry somehow has driven me here. I read out my poems from the comfort of the sofa; I face the audience, but I don't get up from my seat – nerves have pinned me down. I read three or four poems, and am thanked by Mark. Afterwards, someone comments that their enjoyed my work, and hoped that I would come back. It is that small compliment that is enough to ensure this new love affair will continue.

I don't remember much about who else read, but patching together dates and memories from other poets, we can identify that poets I still know today, over twenty years later, were in the room that night. So meeting my first poet immediately led to meeting other poets. The next month, I return and read, and Mark generously invites the unknown entity of me to submit to a poster poster project that he is putting together, to be launched at the first ever Cathedral Quarter Arts Festival. I am invited also to read at the festival. Somehow, I am now a public poet. Thank you, Mark.

 

 

 

 

Colin Dardis is a neurodivergent poet, editor and sound artist. His latest collection is What We Look Like in the Future (Red Wolf Editions, 2022). A pamphlet, With The Lakes, is forthcoming with above/ground press. His latest album is Funerealism (Inner Demons Records, 2022)  www.colindardispoet.co.uk

Stan Rogal : got no flag at all, by Michael Holmes

got no flag at all, Michael Holmes
ECW Press, 1992

 

 

 

 

To say I accidentally happened upon this small volume while perusing my bookshelf would be a lie. The truth is that the name Michael Holmes had resurrected itself to me as part of an on-going internal investigation into the zeitgeist, as I considered much of what passes itself off as poetry these days [just one person’s opinion, you understand, feel free to disagree]: mawkishly personal, mawkishly emotional, mawkishly sentimental [getting redundant here, I know, but…], insular, hermetically sealed against the world except how the world and its structures impinge upon their own perceived individual rights and freedoms, with much beating of chests and gnashing of teeth; a sort of ‘look at me, I’m special,’ attitude along with the requisite personal journey, personal message/flag waving, tinged always with some level of grief, some level of the will and resilience to overcome (and/or blame); where the word ‘accessible’ — a perfectly useful word if one wants to understand a contract, or enter a building, or catch a train — is currently become saddled with connotations of the simple, the trivial and the banal when it comes to the subject matter and craft of poetry.

          So, these were the trigger points that conjured the name Michael Holmes (or, more specifically, his first collection of poems, got no flag at all from ECW PRESS, 1992). To my mind, the title is not only intriguing, but telling, in that it hints to provide a change from much of what is published today and subsequently championed as poetry of literary merit. A further hint was the cover artwork, a logogram (a written character that represents a word or morpheme) designed by Bill Baker as a tattoo meaning SACRIFICE, likely Chinese or Japanese in nature, since it credits “after Ezra Pound and Ian Hamilton Finlay” inside the cover, two poets who were obsessed with antiquity and sought to encapsulate the world in its most compact forms, being, the image; the word.

The red tattoo itself is mounted on what might be recognized as a black wall-hanging, yet the lower part of this cover image is slanted with a thin edge of white, causing it to resemble a guillotine blade. A sign, one hopes, of what to expect once the book is opened and the eye falls upon the page [shades of the Louis Bunuel film “Un Chien Andalou”]: red for passion/blood, black for conflict/death, white for innocence/purity. As in the poem Mapplethorpe, which ends: “when the mind scissors by a calla lily / the negative shall bleed you”. Lovely use of the word “negative” with its implied double meanings: ‘marked by denial, prohibition, or refusal marked by absence,’ as well as being a result of the film developing process, that serves to warn the viewer: you can’t unsee this, the image of the calla lily will have its way with you, in some one fashion or another. A reminder of Pound’s use of the word “apparition” as either “appearance” or “ghostlike” in his famous poem, In a Station of the Metro.

          The book title also brings to mind [my mind, at any rate; fantastically, mysteriously, confoundingly, even] the character of Diogenes, who lived in the 4th century BC, who, when asked where he hailed from, declared himself a cosmopolitan and a citizen of the world, hence: got no flag at all.

In the poem, Translating Neruda, we read: “we inhale spanish” closely followed by “we exhale slavic and stand / for Christ’s sake / in moscow or helsinki spring.” In, An Open Letter, the poet meets a washerwoman, “More a Portuguese / wyf-man-o-war … Voice escalating (picture / Salema, Djerba, Lesbos, Liverpool … None of us belongs / here, none but the lost / tribes: / cigar-store Israelites,” the poem comprised of broken lines, broken thoughts, and enjambments that serve to disconnect character from place of origin. Use of the pronouns “we” and “us” place the poet among the rest. Who is the “I” here except an anonymous mind/body traversing the globe — “Sister, I plot migrations on THE WORLD” — picking up and developing a cadence of stripped-down, muscular, street lingo along the way, attempting to discover a way to fit into a landscape rife with shifting boundaries and all manner of socio-cultural diversity; where every day is a struggle for basic survival: “For sixteen years the family has peddled / food off Bloor, not the gold / sweat of Morocco; getting by with less / English and respect / than the leather-men / of Ad Dakhla.”

          Diogenes was a practitioner of the Cynic philosophy which postulated that, as reasoning creatures, people can gain happiness through rigorous training and by living in a way which is natural for themselves, rejecting all conventional desires for wealth, fame, and power and even flouting conventions openly and derisively in public. Instead, they were to lead a simple life free from all possessions. The word “cynic” derives from the ancient Greek meaning dog-like, and indeed, Diogenes himself lived his life like a dog, begging, eating scraps, sleeping in an abandoned water tub on the street. He would also spit, urinate on people, fart, and masturbate in public. Not that I’m comparing Michael or his behaviour to that of Diogenes [except, perhaps, metaphorically], though Michael, as I recall from OMG! 30+ years ago, did sport the typical costume of the renegade poet, along with the cynic’s attitude: long, unruly hair, five o’clock shadow, tattoos, black T-shirt and jeans, cigarette jammed between his lips, he looked a cross between Arthur Rimbaud, Marlon Brando and Jesus Christ, middle fingers pointing straight to heaven, “pecs ripplin, flag / a fleshscape”. In Where the Air Comes Quick Like Winter, writing: “And he tastes the dogsblood they force into him mix with his own and he has it all over now drowning in it. Him seeing through the crimson night their lips peeling back bearing hungry fangs amidst the hot bubbling foam.”

          Whoever said life was easy? Whatever happened to “no pain, no gain”? Whatever happened to “whatever doesn’t kill you makes you stronger”? Whatever happened to “nothing worth having comes easy”? Whatever happened to SACRIFICE? Whatever happened to “if I exorcise my devils, well, my angels may leave too”?

          Go ahead, sing it Tom. A little night music, if you please.

From This Leaden Spring read: “Yes, we are all of us immigrants. / And yes, we are serene / (whether blind or mad) / degeneration / of lead.”      

          Meanwhile [if not exactly walking hand-in-hand, at least traveling in close proximity], the pair hold a lit lamp in the brightness of day, seeking an honest person, and, perhaps (even) a reason to celebrate. The poet makes an appeal to an imagined audience in Rainsong: “say come O my people, blow the clarion and raise your tankard high; and breathe deep of the bowels of the city, exhale hard with regeneration; caress each and every dirty brick with hands of naming, the mob of hands, sexless Adams; and colour the black dungeons of impregnable shackled family dwellings with the hues of equality…”

          “The hues of equality.” Not speaking here for the one, but the many.

          Got no flag at all.

          At end, who is the poet? Where is the poet? What is the poet feeling? What is the poet trying to say?

At end, how know the dancer from the dance; the poet from the poetry?

How, indeed.

          Perhaps not the most easily accessible poetry around, yet, as my good old pal Basil Bunting was fond of saying: “Never explain — your reader is as smart as you.”

Of course, ever the optimist, Basil also said: “Always carry a corkscrew and the wine shall provide itself.”

          Cheers to that. And cheers to Michael.     

  

 

  

 

Stan Rogal lives and writes in the backwater hamlet commonly known as Toronto, along with his artist partner and their pet jackabee. His work has appeared — almost miraculously — in numerous magazines and anthologies in Canada, the US, and Europe. He is the author of several books, plus a handful of chapbooks. An autodidactic intellectual classicist [reformed]. Speaks semi-fluent English and controversial French. Also a Personal Confessor, Truth Teller, and Psychic Investigator: no job too small; cheap rates.

Nathan Mader : The Penguin Book of Spiritual Verse, ed. Kaveh Akbar

The Penguin Book of Spiritual Verse: 110 Poets on the Divine, ed. Kaveh Akbar
Penguin Books, 2022

 

 

 

The Penguin Book of Spiritual Verse is my favorite kind of anthology—one that doesn’t make any pretence towards objectivity, something its editor, Iranian American poet Kaveh Akbar, stresses as a guiding principle in his introduction. Here you will find a handsome blue hardback with a gold embossed cover containing over one hundred of Akbar’s favorite poems that invoke, engage with, and occasionally interrogate the divine from an impressively wide-spectrum of cultures and an equally diverse selection of poets, poems, and their various translations into English. Luckily for us, most of Akbar’s selections happen to be among the best poems ever produced—from the 23rd century BCE to the 20th century of this our Common Era.

Yes, the roster is stacked, and I’m not about to call into question the extracts from the Epic of Gilgamesh,  Yeats’s “The Second Coming,” or the fragments by Sappho that are rightly included in this anthology alongside bits from The Egyptian Book of the Dead, The Psalms and poems by Li Po, Emily Dickinson, William Blake, Octavio Paz, Frederica Garcia Lorca, Hafez, Ono No Komachi, Lucille Clifton, and numerous other masters and masterworks. This thing taps right into the mainline. However, while many of the poets here will be familiar if you’ve been into poetry for a while, and some are outright mandatory reading, it’s nice that Akbar often chooses poems that are less anthologized—Blake’s “Auguries of Innocence” rather than “The Tiger,” Rilke’s second Duino Elegy in its entirety as opposed to “Archaic Torso of Apollo” to name just two examples. But wait—nothing from “Four Quartets?” No Gnostic texts like the spell-binding “The Thunder, Perfect Mind?” Not a single verse from The Lotus Sutra? Don’t worry—in their stead there are things here you’ve never encountered before, such as “The Painted Book” by 15th century, pre-Columbian Mesoamerican ruler and poet Nezahualcoyotl, that are equally enchanting:

                    
With flowers You write
                     O Giver of Life:
                     with songs You give color,
                     with songs You shade
                     those who must live on the earth.

                    
Later You will destroy eagles and ocelots:
                     we live only in Your book of paintings,
                     here, on the earth…

(trans. Miguel Leon-Portilla)

The most interesting thing to think about when discussing a book like this isn’t why it doesn’t always adhere to one’s own personal canon, but the particular conversations the poems that are there begin to have alongside one another. In curating this anthology, Akbar has taken a chronological, rather than a geographic or cultural, approach that produces some thought-provoking thematic through-lines and energizing shifts in sensibility. In the pages immediately following “The Painted Book,” for instance, is a surreal, delightfully riddling untitled poem by the Indian mystic and saint Kabir written in roughly the same era:

                                Brother, I’ve seen some
                                  Astonishing sights:
                               A lion keeping watch
                                  Over pasturing cows;
                               A mother delivered
                                  After her son was;
                               A guru prostrated
                                  Before his disciple;
                               Fish spawning
                                  On treetops…

                                                   (trans. Arvind Krishna Mehrotra)

These poets, separated by both a literal and metaphorical ocean, which might’ve well been a galaxy, are both trying to get at their experience of the divine through poetry in startlingly different ways. I share Akbar’s sentiments when he points out in his introduction that “Rumi and Dante were living at the same time, gasping at the same stars-the mind reels!” While the two legends never met, they do, in a sense, have a chance to speak to one another in the pages of this book, and there are many other conversations going on.  When I encountered the poem “Astonishment” by the great Polish poet Wisława Szymborska two hundred pages later, I felt the presence of Kabir’s sense of wonder:

                               What is it really made me appear
                               neither an inch nor half a globe too far,
                               neither a minute nor aeons too early?
                               What made me fill myself with me so squarely?  

                                                   (trans. Clare Cavanagh and Stanislaw Baranczak)

These kind of charged correspondences are by no means rare in this anthology, and it’s nice to have some less-familiar voices among the marquee names to see what they have to say to one another. 

The Tao Te Ching, the Bible, the Koran, the Bhagavad Ghita—while it’s a pleasure to check in with them, for the most part the excerpts included here send you back to the source texts. The true value of this book is in finding new companions, such as the Buddhist disciple Patacara’s questioning and clear-eyed look at the nature of enlightenment: “Why haven’t I found peace ? […] / When the lamp went out / my mind was freed.” Or the evocative opening line of the untitled poem by Muhammad Iqbal (“These are the days of lightning…”) that culminates in an assertion that “faith” itself will “renourish the garden.” Or the “Deer Song” of the Yaqui people that uses its incantatory rhythms to remind us that the human and animal realms are bound together through the mysteries of nature: “There he comes out, / there from the enchanted house, / I come out from there...” Bounding ahead several centuries, I was particularly taken with the four pages of “Things I Didn’t Know I Loved” by Turkish poet Nàzim Hikmet, a writer banished from his homeland for nearly thirty years whose work I’d never encountered, and immediately searched out his Selected Poems—generating this kind of newfound enthusiasm is all I can really ask of any anthology. The four-page poem describes his night journey on a train passing through what was then Soviet-occupied Eastern Europe:

                               …the train plunges on through the pitch-black night
                               I never knew I loved the night pitch-black
                               sparks fly from the engine
                               I didn’t know I loved sparks
                               I didn’t know I loved so many things and had to wait until sixty
                                   to find it out sitting by the window on the Prague-Berlin train
                                   watching the world disappear as if on a journey of no return

                                                       (trans. Randy Blasing and Mutlu Konu)

If the poem might appear to be nominally secular—it makes no mention of god, gods, or anything else in that vein—, its inclusion in this anthology speaks to its broader conception of what constitutes “the divine.” In this fleeting life, everything is charged with meaning, and the speaker’s embrace of both the dark and the light, the movement of time and the singular moments of which it’s made has stayed with me. Hikmet, like Basho, reminds us that the divine can be found in the here and now if we are willing to pay attention.

Okay, I have to admit I had initially had some suspicions about the publication of this book being brought out by the giant beast that is Penguin —one need only glance online to see how the “spirituality” and “the divine” have become a brand, which is perhaps nothing new. However, The Penguin Book of Spiritual Verse does well in offering a deeper engagement with and broader conception of divinity, and, along with expressions of ecstasy and awe, there are hells here, too. Paradise Lost. Totalitarianism and the Holocaust haunt the poems of Czesław Miłosz, and Paul Celan. “The mistake,” in Aboriginal Australian poet Oodergoo Noonuccal’s poem “God’s One Mistake,” turns out to be giving humanity free will given what it has elected to do with it. Presciently, this anthology also includes poems by the Russian poets Anna Akhmatova and Ossip Mandelstam, both of whose lives were tragically altered by the Stalinist Russian regime, Akhmatova’s husband and son dying in Siberian labor camps, Mandelstam dying en route to one. In the first Epilogue of her Requiem, Akhmatova metaphorically links her country’s struggles to the history of human “suffering” through the image of ancient Sumerian and Babylonian texts written on cuneiform over 4000 years ago:

                    
I learned how faces fall,
                     How terror darts from under eyelids,
                     How suffering traces lines
                     Of stiff cuneiform on cheeks
                               […]
                     I pray not for myself alone,
                     But for all those who stood there with me
                     In cruel cold, and in July’s heat
                     At that blind, red wall.

                                         (trans. Judith Hemschemeyer)

Akhmatova shows us the power of prayer to connect one to empathy and the collective, but the tension between the speaker’s faith and God’s resounding silence in the face of immense suffering is palpable and echoes through the ages. The first poem in the P.B.O.S.V., and the first known work of all literature, is the Sumerian “Hymn to Inanna” by the 23rd century BCE poet and priestess Enheduanna. While the “Hymn to Innana” also offers praise and expresses worshipful awe at the goddess, the extract Akbar has included highlights the struggles and anxieties of this highly sophisticated culture that eventually destroyed itself by the overconsumption and misuse of natural resources, namely water:

                               Like a dragon,
                               You poisoned the land-
                               When you roared at the earth
                               In your thunder,
                               Nothing green could live.
                               A flood fell from the mountain:
                               You, Inanna,
                               Foremost in Heaven and Earth.
                               Lady riding a beast,
                               You rained fire on the heads of men.

                                                   (trans. Jane Hirshfield)

It’s eye-opening to see how the various incarnations and archetypes the divine has manifested throughout history serve as vessels for not only personal and cultural beliefs, values, and desires, but also their fears and anxieties. Given ongoing wars and the environmental collapse, many of these poems remind us why spiritual poetry has also been called “wisdom literature”—these poems continue to have much to teach us.      

Homer summoned the muses to guide the creation of his epics. Blake saw the Prophet Ezekiel under a tree as a young boy and continued to have visions that informed his art for the rest of his life. Rilke got the opening lines addressing the angels in his Duino Elegies from a voice in the wind. Uvavnuk, the 19th century Inuk oral poet who spoke her poems in Inuktitut, gained her Shamanistic powers of vision and speech after a meteor entered her body. In this poem, she captures a sense of how the power of nature lifts her spirit to a state of self-transcendence, offering her an access point to the ecstatic:


The great sea
frees me, moves me,
as a strong river carries a weed.
Earth and her strong winds

move me, take me away,
and my soul is swept up in joy.

                               (trans. Jane Hirshfield)

To give oneself over to the cosmological “great sea” and be “swept up in joy”—isn’t the mysterious power of language itself what drives all great poetry? In contrast to the kind of “certainty” evident in our current political discourse and systems of violence and oppression, Akbar says that he was “drawn to poems that were certain of nothing […] poems that embraced mystery instead of trying to resolve it.” Personally, I place my highest faith in Keats’s notion of “Negative Capability,” which some have linked to Taoist philosophy, that urges in us a willingness to “be in uncertainties, mysteries, doubts without any irritable reaching after fact and reason” when one enters the realm of art—a willingness to simultaneously be radically present while opening oneself up to possibility. The Penguin Book of Spiritual Verse serves as a welcome reminder that poetry has always been a space of the ineffable, the indescribable, the transcendent, and that one needn’t be a “Believer,” though one could be, to have a spiritual experience through the erotic reaching towards the invisible, the wrestling with the gods, the shout into the void, the Way, the prayer, the spell, the whirling dervish that is a poem:

                               Disappear inside the Divine –
                               There you will find freedom.
                               There is nothing outside that unity.

                               Stop boasting. Shut up and lose yourself;
                               there is no greater honor
                               than losing the ego for love.

                                                   (Attar of Nishapur. Trans. Sholeh Wolpe)

 

 

 

 

 

 

Nathan Mader is from Saskatchewan and lives in Kyoto. His poems have been in The Fiddlehead, Plenitude, The Ex-Puritan, The Antigonish Review, PRISM, The New Quarterly, and The Best Canadian Poetry 2018 (Tightrope Books). The Endless Animal, his first full-length collection, is forthcoming in winter 2023 from Fine Period Press.    

 

Jessica Lee McMillan : The White Light of Tomorrow, by Russell Thornton

The White Light of Tomorrow, Russell Thornton
Harbour Publishing, 2023

 

 

 

Russell Thornton's timeless, lyric poetry is even more emotionally resonant and visually intense in his latest collection, The White Light of Tomorrow. Seeking beginnings in endings on a cyclical journey like Roethke’s "The Far Field," from where this collection draws its title, Thornton continues his poetics of transmuting matter and spirit where: "Light and rock meet, and rock flows like water/ through designs it finds and loses again.(13) Part memoir and part metaphysics, Thornton gives us his characteristically burning, haunted signatures of myth and archetype through the elements, but also through unexpected sources such as a metal sink, an answering machine and a corpse. The collection's long poem, “The Sea Wolf in the Stone" moves from the image of a "ragged man" urinating by a forest highway to scattered needles in a cave in the hills, then takes Blakean leaps from a petroglyph. The lines of the carving expand to "pictures forming in the air" and direct him through water and light back again to the trees and stone. In "The Draftsman's Wound" his father's compass set is likened to a coffin of bones and draws "circle upon circle within itself". These poems teach us lines and circles are not Plutonic forms, nor intellectual exercises, but "a diagram of trance swirls"desire lines of a passionate, poetic voice.

The most emotionally impactful poems focus on Thornton's troubled relationship with his father who he calls "my absent king". "A Coat" is a particularly devastating narrative where the coat is an "unintentional gift" imbued with his father's DNA, as well as a costume where he "learned earliest how inheritance meant prison stripes". In "My Fathers Beard" the beard doubles as ironwork, as a biblical analog of father and son, as well as "ore transformed...yet leading back again to every beginning in the dark earth."

Thornton grounds us throughout the collection via historical Vancouver sites, including the Balmoral Hotel, The Fraser Arms, and Woolco. As with Thornton's childhood poems in this collection, the Vancouver poems are often more unsettling than nostalgic. They serve as a counterpoint to the sublime digressions responding to Song of Songs, such as Shulamite’s aura in "Description" or the white light of the garment in "Shawl". Like Thornton's previous work, vitality endlessly shifts through matter and through us. But in this collection, there is an even keener sense of how imperfect our lives are; how we are fallible vessels, limited by addiction, class and inescapable mortality.

The White Light of Tomorrow also hones in on temporal themes of aging, the anthropocene and facing death. "Blackouts" is a like a brush with death but with the paradoxical revelation that light has to move through darkness. Similarly striking is the observation that “light is beauty and why we live our life in arrears". Meditations on death feel more contemporary and relevant to our epoch in this collection. "Peter's Ice Cream" and "Summer Morning" take us to the immediacy of climate crisis and "Power" admits in Thornton's alternate, matter-of-fact voice: "I can't help it; I think this is it."

Thornton's world, however, does not mire in endings because of its cyclical motion. His poetic receptiveness to moments of consummation along the circle is present in this collection's refrain of "gathering distances". The white light closes distances. It is the beginning in the end. In poems like "Voice", the world collapses into a superposition where Thornton observes "rain whispering in my wrist". Then the circle widens in poems like "Shoes" observing "a conflagration widened from its point of origin".

Thornton's singular villanelle in the collection, "A Dance", is particularly suited to his syntax, which is like an alchemic equation of energies reassigned to different variables: A is B is C is.... The domestic scene of a lover in a doorway is a burning apparition. In "Play Structure", the playground exists on multiple planesit "is a molecule of children" where light itself "assigns roles in a numberless cast". Humanity has little autonomy in this metaphysics, which does not succumb to apocalyptic helplessness but rather awe. In The White Light of Tomorrow, autonomy itself is the inferior myth because a thing is more than itself and not itself forever. But despite the "trance swirls", we never get lost because Thornton never abandons the tangible image. And his images relate to each other more like syllogism than complicated metaphor.

In "The Prophecy" Thornton concludes "I see my task must be to wait and fall away/ in the honey of the moment...", suggesting the same poetic attention of the windswept reader. For us, "Story" imparts why we must surrender to the shimmering moments in the counterpoise of light and dark, desire and loss because:

Whatever heaven we dreamt
spends its energy

along with whatever life we ruined,

as high as any riverside

and as low as any riverbed.

 

 

 

 

 

Jessica Lee McMillan is poet, essayist and civil servant with an English MA and Certificate in Creative Writing from The Writer’s Studio (SFU). Her writing has appeared in over 30 publications across Canada and the US, including The Humber Literary Review, Train Poetry Journal, Pinhole Poetry, GAP RIOT Press, Blank Spaces, Rogue Agent Journal and Rose Garden Press (forthcoming). Jessica is completing her first poetry collection. She lives on the unceded traditional territories of Halkomelem-speaking Peoples (New Westminster, BC) with her little family and large dog. More at: jessicaleemcmillan.com.

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